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Leaves Talking

Always an urge is in action, a basic urge That sings, that moans, that groans, that stones Whether animate or inanimate The passion is everywhere The leaves are always talking In rustle, in bustle, in murmur, in whisper, in bang In whimper when to yellow and disappear In willow-weeping when being ready for sacrifice Under the guise of development of human beings Till now the supreme to destroy In rustling rises the romance of riding on the wind In bustling bursts the barrage of pent up emotions In crinkling cries the yellowing wrinkles of age In crushing under trudges is the message of transformation From dust you come and into dust you go back In scratching and scraping leaves interact in peace and war Leaves love birds and ripple at the sight of their love making Leaves whisper when they hold birds’ nest in pulsating rest Leaves buzz when underneath a man loves a woman in a gust Gently rub your cheek in the foliage and listen to its language In tell tale touch, a leafy hutch __________________________________________________________ 16/9/2016

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Date: 9/19/2016 1:15:00 PM
Outstanding. It seems you know the language of the leaves. The alliteration is also attractive. There is a reference to that line, " Dust thou art, to dust thou returnest.. " in your poem.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/20/2016 6:05:00 AM
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Date: 9/19/2016 12:50:00 PM
The metaphor is so explicit and the picture you painted with words so vivid! Enjoyed it. Congrats :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/20/2016 6:06:00 AM
Thank you Sunita ...
Date: 9/19/2016 6:43:00 AM
great one, need more :))
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/20/2016 6:07:00 AM
Thank you ... In case the muse loves! ...
Date: 9/19/2016 2:10:00 AM
love the repeated words and alliteration Probir congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/19/2016 5:08:00 AM
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Date: 9/18/2016 10:52:00 PM
Fabulous poem. Congratulations on your win, Probir.
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Date: 9/18/2016 11:14:00 PM
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Date: 9/18/2016 10:38:00 PM
Probir, congratulations on your wonderful placement!
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Date: 9/18/2016 11:14:00 PM
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Date: 9/18/2016 8:17:00 PM
I especially like the repeating words and the alliterations. Congrats, Probir. Agnes
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/18/2016 11:15:00 PM
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Date: 9/18/2016 7:35:00 PM
The repetition of words and phrases combined with the cadence of this write drew me into its metaphoric melancholy. Nicely done, Probir. Thanks for participating in the contest.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/18/2016 11:16:00 PM
Thank you very much ...
Date: 9/18/2016 7:30:00 PM
Congratulations Probir on the placement of the contest
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Date: 9/18/2016 11:16:00 PM
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Date: 9/18/2016 7:29:00 PM
I can hear those leaves talking! Congratulations, Probir!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/18/2016 11:20:00 PM
Thank you for your perceptive reaction ...
Date: 9/18/2016 7:27:00 PM
Such a wonderful poem, Probir, with so many images and emotions presented by our 'talking' leaves. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/18/2016 11:21:00 PM
Thank you so much ...
Date: 9/17/2016 7:02:00 AM
Great poem Probir well done your leaves are Happy x
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Date: 9/18/2016 11:17:00 PM
Thank you very much Wendy ...
Date: 9/16/2016 1:01:00 PM
- Probir, this is beautiful ... really enjoy reading - Best wishes and a delightful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/16/2016 11:24:00 PM
Thank you, Anne ...
Date: 9/16/2016 10:34:00 AM
Well penned. Enjoyed & A7 from me.......//:) with love....../Manmath....
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/16/2016 12:51:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and comments ...
Date: 9/16/2016 10:10:00 AM
Wow! Now I know leaves! Wonderful imagery. Love the personification. This is truly a masterful write. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 9/16/2016 12:51:00 PM
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