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When the rain comes in the Fall to the trees, The leaves say to each other, “Oh God, no please!” The wind picks up and they are reluctantly earthbound. Then like fallen soldiers, they drop without a sound. The trees stand naked with their clothes below, Now the dancing leaves wait for the next wind to blow. Children will come in to roll in the leaves... to laugh and play. The leaves will go out in their glory, before Winter rolls in to stay. Written 9/15/16

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Date: 9/18/2016 5:21:00 PM
Ur leaves are talking well Brenda. Very nice pen. Best wishes for the contest..........//hugs
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 9/18/2016 5:27:00 PM
Thank you Manmath! Many beautiful ones have been entered.
Date: 9/16/2016 6:53:00 AM
Very nice ...
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 9/16/2016 9:41:00 PM
Thank you Probir. Fall will officially be here this coming week. I'm glad to see the hot days of summer go.
Date: 9/15/2016 3:30:00 PM
Brings back a lot of memories, Brenda:) A fun read today, left me smiling.
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 9/15/2016 3:40:00 PM
Thank you Daniel. I guess we all remember playing in the leaves when we were kids :)

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