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Leaves In Tanka

Leaves float in the wind Averse to sitting in trees Falls on big debris My dream for palm stays empty Miss your cup of orange tea _________________________ 20/9/2016

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Date: 9/22/2016 2:59:00 PM
I like the ending on this one! Kind of haiku like also!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/23/2016 5:42:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 9/21/2016 5:23:00 AM
I like this Tanka, Probir. I could be there. Barry
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/21/2016 6:30:00 AM
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Date: 9/20/2016 7:56:00 AM
awhh... fascinating tanka filled with sweet sentiments, probir..huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/20/2016 11:00:00 AM
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