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Leaves At Dawn

Leaves at Dawn
Leaves at dawn show off dark silvery sparkling charms, like chandelier earrings dripping with diamond dew drops.
In shifting shadows, leaves at dawn silently contemplate sneaky spiders scurrying from leaf to leaf, craftily spinning and weaving widespread webs, hoping to trap a tasty treat.
A wee bit weary from blowing to and fro in the cool night wind, leaves at dawn faintly quiver, deeply inhaling and exhaling, relishing their own brand of nature’s musky wild woodsy perfume.
Delightfully dizzy, leaves at dawn are still drowsy and dreamy until gently awakened by the enchanting kiss of the sweet, warm early morning sun.
08-07-2014 09-02-2015 Contest: Your Favourite Old Poem #3 (06-27-2015) Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton Placement: 1st Contest: Leaf-Feather-Shell, or Flake (08-17-2014) Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Placement: 3rd

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Date: 10/24/2015 10:38:00 PM
I love trees and leaves, my friend. Leaves are the hanging renewable decorations that give such beauty to trees. You yet again nailed it with this poem! A7
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 10/25/2015 3:40:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Robert. Your compliments and high score always mean a lot to me and I am delighted that you enjoyed this one! Have a nice day! Pandita
Date: 6/30/2015 6:35:00 PM
Pandita, Congratulations on your old favorite poem. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/30/2015 8:50:00 PM
Thank you so very much, my dear Linda! Have a wonderful evening! Pandita
Date: 6/28/2015 12:20:00 PM
This is awesome Pandita! Absolutely love it! Congratulations on your win in the contest ;)
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/28/2015 5:39:00 PM
Hi Wilma, thank you so much for dropping by and leaving your wonderful compliments. So glad you enjoyed it! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 6/28/2015 12:11:00 PM
Wow...so rich with imagery. What a delightful read, Pandita. Congratulations on your win! hugs!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/28/2015 5:37:00 PM
Many thanks, my friend for your lovely compliments! Have a nice day. Pandita
Date: 6/28/2015 8:58:00 AM
Well done Pandita! Congratulations.
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Date: 6/28/2015 5:37:00 PM
Thank you, thank you for your kind compliments! Have a nice evening! Pandita
Date: 6/28/2015 12:38:00 AM
Hi Pandita, Congrats on your win......Love SKAT
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Date: 6/28/2015 5:35:00 PM
My dear SKAT A, thank you so much for your lovely congrats! Warmest regards. Pandita.
Date: 6/27/2015 7:38:00 PM
Pandita, congrats on your 1st place win with this delightful, imaginative write! Love, KIm
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Date: 6/27/2015 9:36:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Kim. I am delighted that you enjoyed this one! Have a nice day! Pandita
Date: 6/27/2015 9:58:00 AM
This was always one of my favorites and I am happy to see it on the winners list. Congratulations dear Pandita on your top win! Kika
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/27/2015 10:43:00 AM
Thank you dear friend for your wonderful compliments that I so much appreciate! Have a beautiful day! Pandita
Date: 6/27/2015 3:18:00 AM
superb imagery Pandita Congrats on 1st place hugs
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/27/2015 9:22:00 AM
Shadow, I am so thrilled about this win! Thank you very much for this high honour and placement! Enjoy a wonderful weekend! Pandita
Date: 1/12/2015 10:25:00 AM
Delightful poem in which you honour nature with a description of leaves at dawn; lovely imagery; musical alliteration; appeal to the senses....well done! #7 hugs // paul
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/12/2015 11:56:00 AM
My dear friend, I love your work and thank you so much for complimenting mine. Your encouraging words continue to inspire me and support my efforts. I also appreciate the high score you gave me for this one! Warmest regards! Pandita
Date: 11/3/2014 5:02:00 AM
Let the dawn talk to you, The song of nature in sweet sensations that surround us
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Date: 11/3/2014 3:37:00 PM
Hi Rene, even your very comments are so beautifully poetic! Thank you my friend for visiting and leaving me these wonderful compliments. Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 9/2/2014 11:27:00 AM
thank you for the reply...Linda
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Date: 8/21/2014 10:15:00 PM
Loved it! Congrats to you Pandita
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Date: 8/22/2014 6:43:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Mark. I am delighted that you enjoyed this one! Pandita
Date: 8/20/2014 12:49:00 AM
Beautiful write! Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Regards, Kika
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/20/2014 1:34:00 AM
Thank you dear Kika for your kind comments which I always appreciate! Pandita
Date: 8/19/2014 8:00:00 PM
I am not surprised that this was a winner, Pandita. Congratulations on your win.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/20/2014 12:00:00 AM
Hi Faye, thank you so much for complimenting my work. It's always good to hear from you. Warmest regards! Pandita
Date: 8/19/2014 6:06:00 PM
Your words paint a wonderful picture of autumn's natural beauty. It is my favorite season, and your poem makes me long for those crisp, cool days. A lovely write, Pandita. Congrats on your win!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/20/2014 12:01:00 AM
Hi Kelly, I love your work and thank you so much for complimenting mine. It's always good to hear from you. Warmest regards! Pandita
Date: 8/18/2014 8:27:00 PM
Pandita Reading your words gave such vivid pictures I felt like I was right there. Thank you, John
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Date: 8/19/2014 9:16:00 AM
Thank you dear friend for your wonderful compliments that I so much appreciate! Have a beautiful day! Pandita
Date: 8/18/2014 6:37:00 AM
this is really beautiful and so descriptive, especially that first stanza; you've made good use of alliteration throughout the poem - congrats on your win! :)
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/18/2014 8:23:00 AM
Hello Charlotte, thank you ever so much for your lovely compliments which mean so much to me! I am honored by your visit! Pandita
Date: 8/18/2014 5:23:00 AM
Absorbing write on the leaves,Pandita. congrats
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Date: 8/18/2014 8:22:00 AM
Hi Dr. Ram, thank you so much for complimenting my work. It's always good to hear from you. Warmest regards! Pandita
Date: 8/18/2014 1:22:00 AM
a beauty in its own right, pandita.. applause to you!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/18/2014 1:26:00 AM
Hi Nette, I love your work and thank you so much for complimenting mine. It's always good to hear from you. Warmest regards! Pandita
Date: 8/17/2014 10:17:00 PM
Pandita, Congratulations, in Andrea's sorta Shell, contest:)....Love Linda
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/18/2014 1:30:00 AM
Hi Linda, thank you so much for complimenting my work. It's always good to hear from you. Warmest regards! Pandita
Date: 8/17/2014 5:31:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Pandita:-) Hugs jan xx
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/17/2014 7:32:00 PM
Jan, I thank you for your wonderful support! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 8/17/2014 5:06:00 PM
Not only is your poem charming and pretty, but it also shows excellent structure. You were able to put the punctuation in the right places and just make a really nice clean poem for my contest. Thanks so much. congrats for your win.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/17/2014 7:30:00 PM
Andrea, I thank you kindly for honoring me with such a high placement in your contest and for the wonderful compliments! Warmest regards, Pandita.
Date: 8/17/2014 2:05:00 PM
See I knew it was a winner! Congrad's on Your win!! Light & Love
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/17/2014 7:31:00 PM
Thank you, Debbie, for your vote of confidence! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 8/13/2014 9:33:00 AM
I cant stop looking at the shape of the leaf clearly portrayed by your poem.........great write. i love it AMOS
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/14/2014 4:32:00 PM
Hello, my friend, thank you ever so much for your lovely compliments which mean so much to me! I am honored with your visit! Pandita
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