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Got a party coming up I need to learn some moves so I listened to the all-time greats for tips on how to groove. These music legends from times past should know the moves to use but what they say is conflicting and now I'm just confused. Curtis Mayfield sang 'move on up' Dobie Gray sang 'get on down' but someone else says 'get on up' can't argue with James Brown. 'Let your backbone slip' says Otis Redding (he sat on the dock) but last time that I tried that move the darned thing went and locked. Chubby Checker did the twist but that just gives me gyp, Van Halen reckon I should jump more likely that I'll trip. On second thoughts, I'll sit it out, ignore the dance floor action. If I take on all of this advice I'll just end up in traction. Some dancers are pure naturals it's how their body's wired, in my case it's much simpler- I'm getting old. And tired.

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Date: 9/13/2016 9:40:00 AM
Hi Viv, I loved your get up/get down rhythmic poem. I was ready to get up/get down myself lol
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Date: 6/21/2015 9:42:00 AM
Super 7 for this fun piece my friend. I dance every morn, right out of bed and get to look at my beautiful wife before she wakes! We both dance the night before..
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Viv Wigley
Date: 6/21/2015 11:36:00 AM
i do occasionally dance around the house naked. Any idea where I can hire a new window cleaner? Thanks for dropping by, Robert. Regards, Viv
Date: 5/6/2015 6:28:00 AM
Hi Viv: Nice to know you. You mentioned all the great rockers and I can relate. My legs aren't what they used to be and thanks for your comment on my 911.
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Date: 4/13/2015 1:13:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem, Viv. Julia, x
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Viv Wigley
Date: 4/13/2015 1:18:00 AM
Thanks, Julia. Hope it's not too early to trip the light fantastic. Viv x
Date: 4/11/2015 2:38:00 PM
This is imaginative, thought provoking, descriptive, and creative all rolled up into a beautiful poem that comes with a shot of sweet nostalgia. Emile. #7
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Viv Wigley
Date: 4/13/2015 1:18:00 AM
Thanks, Emile, appreciate your input. Regards, Viv
Date: 4/11/2015 7:08:00 AM
Nice slice of "older life" Viv..enjoyed this alot..and thanks for the comment!...Peter
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Viv Wigley
Date: 4/11/2015 7:28:00 AM
Cheers, Peter, hope you're well. Have a nice weekend. Regards, Viv
Date: 4/10/2015 9:57:00 AM
Hi Viv,....a clever piece of writing. A lot of research, but you ended up with a fun poem that will entertain people. Well done Viv.....kind regards-----John.....PS: there's not many people writing fun, funny poetry, the world needs you
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Viv Wigley
Date: 4/10/2015 11:06:00 AM
Thanks John, you're very kind. I do enjoy interspersing some of my more sombre work with a bit of lunacy, and am a big fan of folk like John Wulf and Jack Ellison who can throw a firecracker in every now and then to brighten one's day. Anyway, don't just sit there- "Get up offa that thing, and dance till you feel better! Owwww!!". Regards, Viv 'superfly' Wigley
Date: 4/10/2015 8:20:00 AM
This is so much fun! You have created a great piece that causes my mind to flood with memories. 7 all the way. May I suggest one small change in the very last line? "and I'm tired" the extra beat matches the flow of the rest of the piece.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 4/10/2015 11:01:00 AM
Thanks for the comment, Richard, I did dabble with the end, since the last two lines scan when used as just one line, but couldn't make my mind up. Regards, Viv
Date: 4/10/2015 4:12:00 AM
- "I'm getting old" ....many years since I've danced - A great poem - Good luck :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Viv Wigley
Date: 4/10/2015 6:16:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by, Ann-Lise. Viv x
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Viv Wigley
Date: 4/10/2015 6:16:00 AM
oops- Anne-Lise. soz x
Date: 4/10/2015 2:41:00 AM
ha ha ha Viv - i would end up on crutches if I tried all this lol:-) Hugs jan xx
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Viv Wigley
Date: 4/10/2015 4:01:00 AM
You know that you're too old to throw some shapes when you're favourite night time tipple is 'Horlicks'. Have a lovely weekend, Jan. Viv x

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