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Leaping Into Death

Looking from the mountain top i see the depth beneath gaping at me strong wind gushing against my torso I feel the force through my veins Throwing me back to the land But i stand rooted As if I've been shackled to the edge Same as i dwindle betwixt my dream And the morose reality i live in I want to break free, i want to fly I want to scream, i want to cry I have no fear left of leaping into death All i need is to Breathe free; in those last moments As i breathed for the first time in the womb Last but not the least...... Can someone just put a white flag on my tomb.......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/18/2010 10:52:00 PM
This one is equally good!!!!!!! Keep writing!!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!
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Date: 7/7/2010 4:03:00 AM
Welcome Kanupriya :)
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Date: 7/6/2010 12:24:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation.. Aloha..
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Date: 7/6/2010 8:39:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kanupriya. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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