Lean Jean

Once knew a gal named Lean Jean The skinniest young chickie ever seen When she turned to the side Wondered where she did hide Even her shadow disappeared from the scene © Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/8/2015 4:07:00 PM

Lean Jean would be a super good spy huh? Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/8/2015 5:10:00 PM

Right on, my sweet Laura! LOL Love ya ta bits, Jacko xxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 9/8/2015 12:07:00 PM

Now THAT's lean! Our magician Troll want's to meet her... He'd like to learn her trick!... I know... I know... We tried to explain... But he IS a TROLL after all... LOL

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/8/2015 2:07:00 AM

Now u make the shadow disappear too Jack! Pure wit!

Tim Smith

Date: 9/7/2015 11:59:00 AM

Had a brother named big green....meanest dude you'd ever seen....if said a word bout his sis...in your pants you would ####....and you'd be forever known as a queen

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/7/2015 8:36:00 PM

WOW!!! Mr. Tim is starting challenge us for the throne... what do you think John John... is he becoming a real threat and it's time to send our boys to work him over??? LOL