Leaf Explosion

Leaves raked in piles So much fun to jump into Again, raking leaves

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Raul Moreno

Date: 12/22/2008 7:57:00 PM

Excellent senryu BG, one of my favorite forms, looks like you've mastered it well. This is something we all can relate with...Raul

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 12/22/2008 3:40:00 AM

One of my favorite things to do, umping in leaves! YAY!!!!!!! Fun poem, love Kristin

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/21/2008 11:18:00 PM

Dear Beeg, Great Senryu we had an apple tree surrounded by 3 oaks and 2 large elms I would rake all the leaves in the yard under the apple tree climb up the first branch and belly flop into the pile great Memories THANKS I have been having problem with my f computer today this is the longest its been up all day 25 minutes I have been trying to comment back to all the comments I have received all day 43 not all for the Feature...HG

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/21/2008 12:22:00 PM

That's the price of being young at heart....cleaning up afterwards! Cute poem! ~ Love, Carrie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 12/21/2008 10:49:00 AM

Sounds so wonderful Barbara. You painted it so well that it was easy for my mind to leap into this piece and linger. Great job!

Robin L. Gass

Date: 12/21/2008 10:46:00 AM

I agree with Shar! Very creative write. Great imagery. Thank your for sharing with me. Really appreciated your comments. Anxiety can be tough, I'm sorry you must deal with that. I guess I need to purge. God bless. Love Robin

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/21/2008 9:42:00 AM

Ha ha! Makes me want to jump in myself! Oh to be the child and not the adult! Cute write! Love, Shar