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Lead and I Will Follow

Lead and I will follow you, across the deepest seas Sail on tranquil waters, on our quest for joy and peace If you lead me I will follow you, onto the sands of the shores Make love by the rippling waves As I present to you, the gift that is rightfully yours Lead and I will follow you, upon majestic mountain peaks Stretch forth my hands to capture stars, respectfully place them at your feet If you lead me I will follow you, deep into valleys low Lie under peaceful skies, and watch the moon’s magnificent glow Lead and I will follow you, across whimsical rolling plains Stand with you under the heavens, as it pours down its fragment rains If you lead me I will follow you, soaring the soothing skies Fly in a world that is free of fear and doubts, for our eternal lives Lead and I will follow you, discovering unknown lands Journey the earth as man and wife; I will happily give you my hand. If you lead me I will follow you, my predestined soul mate Walk with you on streets of gold, as we enter heaven's pearly gates Chiquita Baity

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Date: 8/28/2011 10:00:00 AM
Chiquita, if I can't follow you at least I can follow your beautifully enticing poetry that always leaves me coming back for more. Thanks for this one along with your kind comments regarding "The WORD." It's a warm feeling knowing someone with your talent is as interested in my work as I am in yours. (Sincerely:) Terry Martin
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Date: 8/19/2011 8:29:00 AM
the more i read of u, the more impressed i am
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Date: 8/16/2011 1:47:00 PM
beautiful........
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Date: 8/16/2011 12:02:00 PM
great contrast with nature....nice write......
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Date: 8/14/2011 6:07:00 AM
very pretty... C.B., a wonderful purpose to follow, fate holds the perfect destiny for us.. i believe we should all follow smooth sails... enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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Date: 8/13/2011 6:03:00 PM
when the girl is ready, the soul mate comes... a beautifully written piece, chiquita; ahh, the sigh of love awaits! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/13/2011 3:54:00 PM
Love the rhyme! Where do I stand in line to be followed by you! Very well constructed, the poem, I mean....so romantic! Keep the write-up! Your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS Kiss, Kiss, Kiss-up> a model to live by, live with inspiration......
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Date: 8/14/2011 6:09:00 AM
he he he ,..i love this comment... how cute...
Date: 8/13/2011 12:18:00 PM
Chiquita, have you found him yet. This looks like the way I would have written a poem when I used to be young and filled with romantic hope. Very nice
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Date: 8/14/2011 6:10:00 AM
i was imaging a God...please tell me if i am wrong.. it was a very high spirt search.. so i imagined GOD.. but Andrea can be right..lol.. how about a manly GOD.. hahha
Date: 8/13/2011 7:53:00 AM
Searching for the other's laugh, the soulmate like the mirror half, to find it sorely is to chaff, but we will keep a searching:( great flow here, Don
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Date: 8/12/2011 10:39:00 PM
You nailed it! You created a perfect poem if there is such a thing! If there isn't then you made it as close to perfect as possible!! Great job!! Wish I had thought of it!
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Date: 8/12/2011 8:34:00 PM
not my cuppatea, but that doesn't mean it lacks goodness. I always like reading your stuff...no matter the subject. You are diverse.4certain.
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Date: 8/12/2011 8:13:00 PM
A beautiful write my friend. Filled with love and a hope for that love to be eternal. Good Job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/12/2011 6:18:00 PM
A lovely write indeed, Chiamaka! And thanks for reading my poem and also commenting!
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Date: 8/12/2011 5:42:00 PM
Having read your work before, This is an exceptional Write. It is romantic poetry at its best and I should enter one of the competitions with this, if I were you. I know what I like and this is beyond good, i shall add it to one of my fav poems. well done.
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Date: 8/12/2011 5:29:00 PM
vivid and lovely imagery..truly lyrical. I wish somebody sings this for me.
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