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Lazy Poet

Don't be lazy I tell myself Do something crazy.... Be that hard working elf Don't write three lines If they not have depth.... Go beyond simple letter on straight lines Write from a true source,you heart......... Don't be lazy i tell myself I have a gift That doesn't mean i should sleep on the shelf Or under utilize it Don't be crazy Be creativity.... Let your mind be activate Write something worth reading..SERIOUSLY Don't be crazy Give them poetry Appease their hunger.... They've been waiting for a writer Give them their heart desire Rekindle that fire ******** Hi friends.Please leave your comments.This poem for me is a challenge to him and other poets.To step-up our game and write good poems.we've been lacking that for a while now.Its not about quantity,but quality..please leave a comment if you feel the same way too or otherwise....*****

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Date: 12/24/2012 8:41:00 PM
Prince, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD
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Date: 5/14/2012 8:06:00 AM
All poets are not lazy but your inspiration boosts up me because am lazy. Thanks, loved always, bl
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Date: 5/2/2012 11:15:00 AM
I am really thát lazy that the picking of a daisy in this meadow that’s still hazy seems to me an act so crazy slumbering so blissfully that I mumble wishfully: ‘could I sleep for neverwaking...’ - for your sake this wish forsaking yet succeeded in the making of this poem, my dear Prince. Hope it does not make you wince.
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Date: 4/29/2012 4:23:00 PM
Hey Prince! Yes, I feel that way also,,,,we need depth of thought not empty tho'ts when we right. I write funny stuff to tickle the kids but my fav poetry is that which has a purpose...Please visit The Little Red House when you can swing by...I think this poem shines...your tho't processes are right on target with mine! Love to read your work! Gwendolen
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Date: 4/30/2012 1:09:00 PM
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Date: 4/29/2012 9:36:00 AM
Hi Prince, so glad you have the gift of giving some words to stir the mind! Yes, we need great poetry to read; somehow it adds so much to our lives. LUv, Elizabeth
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Date: 4/27/2012 10:17:00 PM
I really enjoyed this :). I tell myself not to be lazy a lot! Thank you for your feedback on my poem. Thank you for your motivation from yours.
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Date: 4/24/2012 10:10:00 PM
i agree with you 100% i really liked this and thank you for your comment on mine
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Date: 4/24/2012 3:18:00 PM
Hi, prince,, hope you got my soup-mail... feed me..feed me..lol...thank you for the participating smile. i got the logs on,,now start that fire.. and lets roast some mellows words.. love the activity that plays through your words.. have yourself a great and wonderful day,..pd
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Date: 4/24/2012 12:51:00 AM
I understand what you are saying with these words Prince...If it comes from the heart,it will reach another heart more easily.You know this for it is written in your words! So now don't be lazy! And get writting some more heartfelt words..Ha,ha... Nice view!
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Date: 4/23/2012 10:57:00 AM
Am challenged. This gift mine will never be left to lie dormant. This piece is a push for action.
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Date: 4/22/2012 3:06:00 PM
It's well written Prince.. I'm glad you've shared your heart.. Keep on writing... Love Diana
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Date: 4/22/2012 3:05:00 PM
I was lazy for many years and only wrote when I felt an overwhelming urge. Now, I write everyday, and only post what I think others might enjoy reading.
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Date: 4/22/2012 2:33:00 PM
Yes you have a gift....well done Prince. - oxox Anne-Lise
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