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Memories of days spent at Hillsborough River State Park near Tampa, FL. 
There’s a lazy old river in the back of my mind Our family would visit from time to time, Where the waters ran gently through countless miles Of live oaks and woodlands, placid and wild. Wherein one such place I still can trace The vestiges of those days Filled with watermelon fights and blue herons in flight And mom’s apple pie, homemade. With wheelbarrow races and so many faces Of friends long gone like the rain… Cool, clean and like a dream Disappearing, just like they came. Playing Tarzan and fly from a rope we would tie On a limb hanging over the bank With a loud whooping yell and smile as we fell Into old man river and sank. Down to the bottom and touched the sand And popped back up once more Laughing like crazy ‘till the sun set lazy Ending our day by the shore. With our dad and a book and that one special look That it’s time to start saying our prayers Of goodness and grace and thanks for that place Where my heart still lingers back there.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/14/2013 6:39:00 PM
i was able to picture it all so well and it made me wish i was back there with you! great write1
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Date: 3/14/2013 4:47:00 PM
what lovely memories, nice write ...Seren
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Date: 3/14/2013 4:04:00 PM
Terrell, it sounds like fun.... :-) thank you for taking me into the memory of your childhood. I especially like the image of you swinging like Tarzan,,, humm them good o'days... always~ LINDA
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Date: 3/14/2013 4:00:00 PM
You certainly have a way with words so as to make poetry sound easy. An enjoyable, delightful read that held me from start to finish. Nice one, Terrell, as is your wont. Licia :)
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Date: 3/14/2013 2:23:00 PM
This is such a good story...very enjoyable and brings back memories, and warmth.
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Date: 3/14/2013 1:54:00 PM
Sounds like a great place, you have a lot going on in the back of your mind.
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