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Lazy

Radiant sun so bright in azure skies Oh truly this day is beautiful As I bake in the warmth, my hand shading my eyes Forgotten, all thoughts of being dutiful YOUR BEST FOUR-LINE LIGHT VERSE, NO. 2 Poetry Contest 21.09.21

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Date: 10/17/2021 1:19:00 AM
A day of relaxation and to write lovely poetry, as this is! Harry
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Melody Wiggett
Date: 10/19/2021 8:56:00 AM
:) thank you Harry :)
Date: 10/11/2021 11:38:00 PM
An appealing little poem. That one word, "dutiful" lends itself to all manner of assumptions...intriguing choice of word. Best regards! :) john
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Melody Wiggett
Date: 10/19/2021 8:56:00 AM
:) thanks John :)

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