Laziness

blanket of white stretched backlash of society laziness Written for Sponsor Charles Henderson Contest Name haiku vs. senryu

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Date: 2/1/2011 9:20:00 PM

You have me smiling with this one. Congratulations on your contest win. Keep on writing. Wishing you ongoing success. Karen

Deb Radke

Date: 1/26/2011 8:04:00 PM

This is a very interesting haiku. I had to read it several times; each time getting more and more from it. I like this very much. Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. Very well deserved. Best wishes. Deb

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/25/2011 4:21:00 AM

Congratulations Cecil, for the win in Charles Henderson's contest "haiku vs senyru". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2011 10:27:00 PM

VEry interesting message in this haiku. A big congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/24/2011 5:27:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest Cecil, wonderful entry

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/24/2011 10:30:00 AM

i'm bewitched,cecil... BEST CHEERS to you for the special win..:) huggs, nette

John Freeman

Date: 1/24/2011 9:52:00 AM

Way to go Cecil, on yoru worthy poem's 7th place. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/24/2011 9:20:00 AM

Wonderful poem, Cecil. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/24/2011 8:57:00 AM

Hi Cecil - Congratulations on your WIN in the contest. Best wishes, KC

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/24/2011 6:46:00 AM

Congrats Cecil on your super win in the haiku vs. senryu contest.. awesome win my friend..luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/23/2011 4:02:00 PM

Great images on the theme of laziness, and good luck

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/23/2011 4:00:00 PM

Good luck in the contest with this great work..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/23/2011 11:10:00 AM

very impressive and well-crafted, cecil.. winning streaks to you in the contest! :) huggs, nette

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/23/2011 11:04:00 AM

a good entry for the contest Cicil, like the second stanza, a backlash it does bring, good luck on the contest, enjoyed,..p.d.

Nebeolisa Okwudili

Date: 1/23/2011 10:54:00 AM

pretty imteresting on haiku.