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Layers of Me

I sit naked and exposed... The sky my ceiling to write and pose... Sprinkled pieces fall and stick to my soul... They are fragments of my dreams that drop and unfold... I stand with arms raised touching the layers of me... And then sit and write as my Poetry flows free...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Gwendolen Song
Date: 12/22/2011 3:44:00 PM
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This is extraordinary!! Love the sprinkled pieces that fall and stick to your soul!! This is my dream....to write poetry like this, Michael. The Layers of YOu are wonderful!! This will be on the first page of your next book!! Fragments of My Dreams~by Michael Falotico! lol. Gwendolen
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Dinda Minardi
Date: 12/22/2011 9:30:00 AM
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I love this!!! Congratulations on the win :) loved eeach line, Michael.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 12/20/2011 10:22:00 AM
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I really like this one Mike..one suggestion on the last line ..perhaps stop at Poetry. BIG Congrad's Happy Holy Days
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/20/2011 2:18:00 AM
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Smashing Congratulations x
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John Freeman
Date: 12/19/2011 5:33:00 PM
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What great poetry is made of Michael, Yours is has a uniqueness of it's own. Congratulations on your top place. Agape, Moses
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/19/2011 3:23:00 PM
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Sounds like yoga for poetry, Michael. REally cool. Congrats on your win in Brian's contest.
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Ralph Taylor
Date: 12/19/2011 11:51:00 AM
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Congrats, Mike. Great job. Nice going. Happy Holidays to you and yours. Ralph
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Jon Arno
Date: 12/19/2011 6:44:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win in the Sixes And Sevens contest :)
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 12/19/2011 6:20:00 AM
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Congratulations on your super win in Brian's "Sixes And Sevens" contest Michael. Love, Carol
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Reneice Mowatt
Date: 12/18/2011 1:37:00 PM
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Now this is DEEP! like it :-) S>S>S> short, sweet and spicy!
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Wilma Neels
Date: 12/18/2011 8:01:00 AM
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hehe, I had to laugh at Catie's comment ;) enjoyed your write filled with layers ;) love Wilma
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