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Lavender Flowers- Visual 6

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Misted clouds of lavender petals brush our bare feet softly, But the vibrant flowers are faded and whithered to brown shells Compared with how my heart beams like a rainbow when we're together.

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Nandita Das

Date: 3/30/2015 9:41:00 AM

How can such beauty flow from a pen? Pure magic. Awesome.

Skat A

Date: 2/15/2015 10:46:00 PM

Isaiah, Awesome take, Congrats in Andrea's Sijo contest. -- SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/11/2015 1:42:00 AM

Ah that's so lovely Isaiah,, my fav visual but i couldn't say a thing,, a perfect 7 to u,, Congrats on big win!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/10/2015 3:34:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work. Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 2/8/2015 2:26:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Isaiah:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/8/2015 8:53:00 AM

This is a masterful write! Congratulations.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/8/2015 7:40:00 AM

Lovely take you have captured from this lavender visual, Isaiah! I like the imagery and the romantic atmosphere. Congrats on a worthy win. All the best. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2015 1:05:00 AM

Isaiah, I love the imagery of that first line. it's gorgeous. You chose a picture that I thought was so pretty because lavender is my favorite color. Congrats in my contest.

Casarah Nance

Date: 1/31/2015 6:26:00 PM

Your words are wonderful!

Jan Allison

Date: 1/31/2015 6:18:00 PM

We chose the same visual again Isaiah! Stunning imagery and so beautifully romantic - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx 7 from me of course:-)

Poesy Relish

Date: 1/31/2015 1:01:00 PM

a truly beautiful pen... nad!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/31/2015 10:33:00 AM

I can smell the perfumed scent of lavender ,and it fills me with serenity..Beautiful and romantic.I wonder if Rosetta was watching : ): ))