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Laundry, odor, stink Parmesan cheese, fungus, dirt Bleach, washing powders (Let me Haiku you from a grandmother's point of view.)

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Date: 1/20/2010 11:35:00 AM
Another little gem Sara >> James
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Date: 1/20/2010 7:04:00 AM
Sara, I think this one would be GREAT (for the contest). Every single word is a noun, and though one is being used as an adj., it can also stand alone as a noun. I am always so fixated on grammar, that is why I avoided this one. I was taking his rules very technically. And hardly anybody in the contest has EVERY single word being actually USED as a noun. This one is near perfection, if that is what he is going for!! Also, I love the topic and the great description of this. Luv, andrea
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Date: 1/19/2010 6:51:00 PM
As one Grandma to another I totally understand your Haiku... great use of words Sara... enjoyed.. and can totally relate ... having four sons and grandkids too...sometimes washer overload...haha.. blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/19/2010 3:15:00 PM
you can come do my laundry too!! ha ha.
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Date: 1/18/2010 11:09:00 AM
Smile, yes should have a part in this Sara. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 1/18/2010 11:08:00 AM
Smile, yes should have a part in this Sara. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 1/18/2010 9:13:00 AM
Great Haiku written by you. Nice read Sara. Best Wishes Always, Bill - Soup Mail
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Date: 1/18/2010 9:09:00 AM
Souds like a fun-filled day....:].......:JP]
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Date: 1/18/2010 8:15:00 AM
We get your point Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.
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Date: 1/18/2010 8:15:00 AM
Oh yes....as mothers, we have seen it all!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/18/2010 6:29:00 AM
You ladies never know when your well off Ha! Ha! Daniel
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Date: 1/18/2010 5:50:00 AM
A Great all noun Haiku, Sara. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments today. Love, Lainie
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