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Laughter Is the Best Medicine Lim'Rik Contest

Pizza Dream Dreamt I was eating mouse soup rodents lined up in a troop fell in the broth then they got tothed down the hatch and turned to poop

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Lu Loo

Date: 10/21/2016 9:20:00 AM

ahaha! very funny and cute :) Congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 10/23/2016 9:40:00 PM

Thanks LL!

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/20/2016 8:28:00 PM

Hi John, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 10/23/2016 9:40:00 PM

Thanks Alexis!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/20/2016 7:09:00 PM

Great humour John .. your rhyme and syllable was slightly off Many congrats on your 3rd place :-) hugs Jan xx

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 10/20/2016 7:29:00 PM

Thanks JA! I'm glad they are all clumped together now so I can go savor them. I knew mine was off kilter, but I just had to get POOP in there somewhere:-) Thanks for cloistering the clowns! ps. give "things gone missing" a read if you get time — might be good fodder for a collab huggananas ~ j

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/14/2016 10:08:00 PM

Hi John, I'm with Casarah, I'm suddenly not hungry anymore. But I must say this a good limerick.Jan will love this. I'm sure it will be on the winners list. I wish you the best of luck in the contest: -)Alexis

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 10/15/2016 10:11:00 AM

Thanks Alexis. I was tempted to write a more "colorful' one for Jan, but decided to keep it mild;-) cheerios! ~ j