Laughter

Laughter fills the air And it sets the sun alight Breathes life into all It grants us serenity And we giggle, merry fools.

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Susan Palli

Date: 5/13/2010 12:35:00 PM

Loved it!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/13/2010 4:15:00 AM

I can not tell you what it meant to me to be able to read your poetry today Hunter. I wish you the best in your writing and hope each day takes you to greater heights in it. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/12/2010 1:57:00 PM

enjoyed, welcome to poetry soup, the mix of warm writing skills and tall tales...We like to add seasonings such as your work often!

Date: 5/12/2010 1:22:00 PM

You have me smiling with this one. Thank you for this day brightener. I see you recently joined Poetry Soup. Welcome. I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/12/2010 12:27:00 PM

Without laughter we might still be fools, but not merry ones, Hunter. You make an important point in your uplifting tanka! Best wishes, Carolyn

John Loving Iii

Date: 5/12/2010 11:43:00 AM

laughter is the truest reaction we can make. john