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Laughter - Pleiades Form

Like the surge of rolling waves rushing in, Laughter moves with unexpected urgency. Lithe and spontaneous, it flows sweeping, Loosens up the pouting lips to a roar that's free. Language of the comic but it gives relief, Lays there the outlet for some fun and tears, Laughter eases pain and makes for younger years! All rights reserved ~~~ Cynthia Buhain-Baello~~~03.07.14 *Pleiades- poetry form of 7 lines, all lines begin with the first letter of the title.

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Date: 3/29/2014 1:15:00 AM
Thank you Paul Callus
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Date: 3/28/2014 11:53:00 AM
You did a good job here, both in form and expression. laughter is the tonic for a healthy 'life'. // paul
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Cynthia Buhain-Baello
Date: 3/29/2014 1:18:00 AM
Thank you Paul.

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