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Laughing At Us

Times are the best when baby sis and I get together; no special reason or holiday, just to have fun. Miles separate us now along with eight years but when we’re joined, it is hard to tear us apart. I believe we think too much alike; both of us are carefree and happy go lucky; we even look alike - poor thing. I believe we acquired our slap-stick personality from mother, she always made us laugh. I recall the time sis invited me to come to Tennessee and go visit the Lynchburg Barbecue Cook-off with her. I had had a left knee replacement the year before and still had to get around in my wheeled walker with hand breaks and a let down seat just in case I needed a chair and couldn’t locate one. She pulled me all over the cook-out area backwards. Someone from the news staff was doing a story on the cook-off and saw me reading a Lynchburg news paper while being pulled backwards and asked if they could take my picture. Well, I found out that they already did and it was to appear in next week’s edition. We had our fill of delicious barbecue, bought some homemade fried pies, bought a few souvenirs, and decided it was time to head back home since I had a long drive back to my house. Sis, bless her heart, told me to stay seated and she would pull me back to my car. I helped her get me up the slope to the sidewalk and took my seat on the walker. Being pulled, I relaxed a bit, we were half way there. Neither one of use noticed the huge separation in the walk until the walker and I tumbled backwards, my feet and hands straight up in the air. Sis couldn’t stop laughing, I couldn’t stop laughing, cars slowed almost to a standstill; traffic backed up. A couple of people walking our way stopped to see if I was ok, I couldn’t stop laughing long enough to say I was. Sis was too doubled over to help me get up. If we hadn’t stopped to relieve ourselves earlier, we would have there. Of all the great times I recall, that was the best. Some people have to get drunk or take dope; all I have to do is do something with my sister and we get high together… Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey

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Date: 4/1/2011 4:34:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this one and laughing along as I read it, reminded me of my sister and I when we get together. Good luck Alexa
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Date: 3/30/2011 5:13:00 PM
This is a "spectacular" poem, I so enjoyed reading it, best of luck in the contest~~
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Date: 3/29/2011 4:39:00 PM
I enjoyed the intellectual and high humor with broad smile, Caryl
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Date: 3/29/2011 1:16:00 PM
How cool that your whole family has such a great sense of humor, Caryl. Oh my, how terrifying it must have been when that walker tumbled backwards! Did you see the Seinfeld episode where they bought a disabled girl a used wheelchair and the brakes on it failed? Couldn't help but think of this while reading your work here. Bravo for your courage and the way you don't take life too seriously. Hope to see this poem in the winners' circle, Caryl! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/29/2011 10:25:00 AM
gassed up all the way, caryl.. looks like you are twin sisters! what fun i had with this narrattive; engaging! :) winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/29/2011 8:20:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative poetry today Caryl. The best to you in the contest.Have a wonderful day and may you find even more inspiration to write as the day goes by. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/28/2011 10:17:00 PM
Caryl, this sounds just like my sisters and ME when we get together. Also I used to have great slumber parties with my friends where we would all pretend to be drunk. We actually acted drunk and yet I never drank in all my life except one time just to taste it as an adult! I enjoyed learning this of you.
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Date: 3/28/2011 8:32:00 PM
A wonderful form Caryl and a more wonderful message in your lovely lines.. good luck in the contest..an amazing piece am sure Desiree will so enjoy as I have tonight luv..
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Date: 3/28/2011 8:25:00 PM
Wonderful story, Carly, and a very enjoyable poem to read, good luck in he contest, Harry
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