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Late Forties

We never thought of how smart we were or where life would lead us as long as it liked us and then the baby was born, scorn and derision a black and white commercial a break from the tedium and talking of them we couldn't be them when we were too busy being us. (The race was always on.)

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Date: 3/26/2018 1:02:00 AM
Thank you Caren, best wishes j
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Date: 3/25/2018 1:46:00 PM
I would like to introduce this poem to the battered women shelters all across America, and in other countries too. Nicely put, and well-written, Chelci. All the best!
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Date: 3/25/2018 1:40:00 PM
This is going straight to favorites; I love it! You have expressed so many sentiments that I have. I like being the powerful dictator over my paintings, and my poems. It is such a good time!
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Date: 3/25/2018 1:29:00 PM
This makes me smile, shades of a new love full of excitement and promise!
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Date: 3/25/2018 1:26:00 PM
Whoa! Nicely penned, John.
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