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Late At Night

It was late at night and the house was creaking every sound seemed twice as loud as normal My nerves were all a jangle and it felt very cold not at all like usual I tensed at each new creak. I crept around listening as I went through rooms that seemed much darker and very gloomy, I could not at first find anything out of place But the sense of deep unease washed over me. I put and left every light on as I searched yet still felt uneasy, something was very very wrong even with the house lit up like a Christmas tree what on earth was causing this deep sense of unease I could hear a weird rustling noise in the pantry trembling I opened the door and saw nothing at first then with a rush and scream out shot my kitten hair all on end, I had accidently shut him in With a sigh off relieve I picked him up and calmed him It took a while until he relaxed and started to purr the house now felt safe and back to usual I laughed thinking what a fool I had been and relaxed with him

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Date: 9/22/2023 12:39:00 PM
Hello my friend.. It has been a long time and I hope all is well.. I can see your poetry is still as excellent as it always was... Great stroytelling..
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Silent One
Date: 9/22/2023 1:05:00 PM
I'm sorry to hear that
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/22/2023 12:58:00 PM
Ty so much for taking the time to read Health not so good but worst is my failing eye sight
Date: 9/21/2023 7:15:00 PM
A very fun story! I enjoyed reading this, the similes used here are pretty clever :-) -AG
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