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Last Will

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Last Will

Dear Family and Friends, 
	My life had just ended as you all know. It was hard for me to keep a living image 
of me when my body is dead. Forever I will remember. Life had just begun and now it’s the 
time to end.
	Life was too complicated for me to withstand. Even for the ones I didn’t mean for 
them to suffer. My past was a present. The present is now a nightmare. The future is now 
forgotten. Day and night I suffer with the same pain I feel everyday.
	Whoever suffered along with me I am very deeply sorry .My life was filled with 
gifts and precious people but now I am empty with nothing at all.
	I do not wish to agonize others with my pain and suffering. The greatest debt I 
would owe everyone is my life. I have died to keep you safe and most of all happy. Thank 
you everyone for everything that I shouldn’t possibly deserve. I will always watch over 
everyone no matter what happens.

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  1. Date: 6/15/2010 4:36:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Marianne. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/14/2010 6:15:00 PM
    A sad thing, but strong and deep write...P.D.

  1. Date: 6/14/2010 5:58:00 PM
    Awesome poem