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Sunlit rays illuminate the Moon, intensifying Her gilded glow. And She shimmers like a gold doubloon reflected, where rippled waters flow. She adopts an aura when it's time to perform Her celestial ascent. And like a Goddess, She starts Her climb, featured in the night's gala event. An ebony curtain, pierced by stars, ushers in the beauty of the night. And a red tinge tints the planet Mars; as Venus unveils Her hidden light. The birds surrender the night to bats, snatching skittish moths right from the air. Rats seek shelter from night's feral cats, and shifting shadows seem self-aware. Darkness swallows remnants of the day; imposing itself upon the night. And color silently fades away amidst the last vestiges of light.

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Date: 5/13/2018 10:53:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Emile.
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Date: 9/3/2016 8:09:00 PM
Agree totally with Laura, couldn't say it better. Loved this read! You are amazing! Keep them coming we love them!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/4/2016 8:06:00 AM
Thanks John, your comments are both encouraging and most welcome. Emile.
Date: 9/2/2016 3:35:00 PM
Stunning imagery woven in silk, Emile! Loved this beautiful write, 7, and all the best to you :)
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Date: 9/2/2016 7:37:00 PM
Thank you so much Laura, it is always a pleasure to hear from you my friend. Emile.
Date: 9/2/2016 10:33:00 AM
Just beautiful, Emile. I think your writing probably even awes the moon that awes you. I feel it should be against the law for you to go x amount of days without writing for you create much needed beauty and never fail to wow me. (I'm probably repeating myself) ... CayCay
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/2/2016 10:57:00 AM
Thanks so much CayCay, your words have touched my heart. Emile.
Date: 9/1/2016 6:20:00 PM
A fabulous verse emile...love the moon theme
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/1/2016 6:29:00 PM
Thanks Tim, I appreciate your support. Emile.

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