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I met a couple,still after 50 years of marriage interesting is that they can still make each other laugh & cherish not worried about their children bcoz they are able & don't depend on them husband still cares for wife's little needs their love is fair & without any greed they have enough memories of past with which they can make it to last man holds his wife's hand & praise his first & last girlfriend the woman still have lust in eyes for him & her husband asking anything you want i can bring their relationship made a deep impact i wish my story could be somewhere like that

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Date: 12/12/2013 11:59:00 PM
very beautiful couple and poem.
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Date: 12/11/2013 6:42:00 PM
Lekhram, ,A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/11/2013 1:56:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Lekhram ! - Nice to read your first poem here.:)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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