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With beads of sweat on my forehead, And my arms and legs cramped. I concealed in a little locker Away from the horrid mayhem. Damp and worn; fear and torn I seldom gasped for breath, And even tried reciting Othello, Macbeth and Hamlet. Alas, all in vain! Aware with each passing minute, That I would face the same brutal end As my tutors and friends. I heard them moving closer, I say a silent prayer. With final memories of my beloved - I await those crazy monsters. "Bang, Bang!" I hear them shoot. But it now sounds so afar. I drift into a deep slumber, When the door goes ajar.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/8/2015 3:40:00 PM
RADHIKA, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Radhika Bhangolai
Date: 2/18/2015 8:50:00 AM
Hi Linda, Thank you so much for the warm welcome. I'll definitely try giving a shot on the contest :)
Date: 2/8/2015 3:00:00 PM
Radhika, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Radhika Bhangolai
Date: 2/18/2015 8:54:00 AM
Hi Skat, it's wonderful to be apart of this group. I'm really excited, and I hope I come up with some good poems :)
Date: 2/4/2015 11:48:00 AM
well written
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Radhika Bhangolai
Date: 2/18/2015 8:57:00 AM
Thank you :)

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