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Last Teardrop Fell

Three evergreen years, and a rainbow lifetime ago, was when the last teardrop fell It fell upon the autumn leaves in the winter vale Two hibernating hearts, slumbering through the hurt, awake hungering for love A spring taste of sweet honey to share with another One sky mountain to climb, above the cresting river below, to reach the summer snow crystal ground Where those melting tears of joy are waterfall flowing down Three Lebanon years, and a red cedar lifetime ago, was when the last lonely teardrop fell Now the night stardust covers us, so Mt. Carmel lovingly well

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/9/2018 1:30:00 PM
- I enjoy this touching romantic poem, Freddie - Beautiful - Have a lovely weekend, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/9/2018 1:25:00 PM
Splendid poem, and intriguing: Have you seen the mighty cedars of Lebanon and/or Mt. Carmel? (I have; I'm Israeli as well as American). Great imagery; great write! :) Gershon
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Date: 3/9/2018 6:14:00 AM
Here he is that romantic warrior... Great poem with so many great lines..
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Date: 3/8/2018 12:45:00 PM
Made me think of an old Freddie Fender song, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EgioXXWWV-M before the next teardrop falls. Nice write.
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Date: 3/8/2018 11:21:00 AM
A rainbow lifetime ago.. such a mysterious time frame, isn't it? Well penned. Love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 3/8/2018 10:51:00 AM
Excellent Freddie..among the best..you do so well writing about love and romance.
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Date: 3/8/2018 10:39:00 AM
I love this Freddie. A beautifully written poem! :)
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