Get Your Premium Membership

Last Song

A simple note, strung with words of love. A unique purity, Spoken from the heart, A fragment of beauty. With more strings that are strung, A brand new note has begun. Rushes of new emotions, All clinging to the same devotion. Strobing notes after notes, No longer needing to stay afloat. A book with its pages all fullfilled, A spirit now rests for it no longer has to rebuild

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/19/2014 8:37:00 PM
WONDEHFUL AND ELEGANT WRITE. Simply amazing. Thanks for being a true friend and fan of my works. Will read more from you soon! :) Pen on! -DWBness
Login to Reply
Earnings Avatar
J.W. Earnings
Date: 6/19/2014 8:39:00 PM
Congratz for featured poem. I've had that happen a couple of times and I get all happy and cheery!
Date: 5/18/2014 7:00:00 PM
Ettie, you put into words they way I've always seen interrelated stories; How they formed one by one and how they all came together. There may be the final story of a book's ending chapter but the cycle begins anew just like poetry's creative infinity. :D
Login to Reply
Christian-Bowling Avatar
Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 5/19/2014 11:48:00 AM
Wow thx My Friend your words mean so much :-)-Love Ettie
Date: 5/13/2014 9:33:00 PM
Ettie... Nice seeing your poem featured on the poetry soups home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Login to Reply
Christian-Bowling Avatar
Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 5/15/2014 6:56:00 PM
Thx yea its sweet having it featured-Love Ettie
Date: 5/13/2014 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Ettie
Login to Reply
Christian-Bowling Avatar
Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 5/13/2014 7:09:00 PM
Thx doc-Love Ettie

Book: Shattered Sighs