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Last Ritual Before a Monk

On anallizing Buddhism,i can safely say the calming aura it gives off,when knelt down to prayer it seems to have a feeling,that i would describe contentment and peacefullness,is what i prescribe. Boys as young as five,who chose to be a monk being all of equallity,a level form of unsunk. Going from my own sights,the monks just prayer and work always doing something,no time it seems to lurk. A gathering is held , and marching to the monestry his hair is shaved,and danced along,like a little party the villagers and family,are with him all the way til he reaches the holy place,in which where he will stay. Paul Beadnall for: Sponsor Brian Strand Contest Name SEPTEMBER-YOUR CHOICE any theme/form max 14 lines

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Date: 7/29/2011 9:51:00 PM
Really good imagery here my friend. I can actually see it all as I read. Good job. God Bless, JB
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 10/4/2012 10:15:00 AM
Thanks Judy with blessings from Paul
Date: 7/29/2011 9:43:00 AM
Very interesting write Paul. Love, Carol
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 7/29/2011 10:44:00 AM
Thanks very much Carol,blessings as usual Paul

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