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This poem was written to help those who read it Reflect and most importantly to Remember all those fallen since 1914. I hope it makes people think about the importance of Remembrance Day and Armistice Day.

Last One Standing The man stood looking Staring over the hill, Watching, waiting, Just standing there for what? Only he knew. He seemed to be There always, The field No longer the same, Since changed In the years gone by. But still he remained Looking, watching, Then slowly He moved forward, Being careful Where he trod. A few more paces Then stood still Once more, Saying a few words And laying a wreath, For the friend long lost, On the field Where the battle took place. Now he stands alone The last of his friends. Slowly he turns as he fades off Into the distance, The very last one Now gone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/5/2016 6:30:00 PM
Wow. I am a huge fan of soldiers. It takes a brave courageous person to do battle. As much as noone likes war--we love the soldiers. This poem "Last One Standing" illustrates the bond soldiers share, and the connections that only severe perhaps at death...but who knows maybe not even then. Thanks, Toni O.
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Gail Underwood
Date: 1/24/2016 8:26:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely feedback Toni, true we love soldiers but not the wars they fight.
Date: 12/17/2015 2:38:00 AM
i see a tinge of depression in all those poems which i read in your page...and yes, those gave much energy to move on and take the good fight :)) Thank you Gail
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Gail Underwood
Date: 12/17/2015 7:57:00 PM
I guess there might be a touch of depression in a couple of my poems depending on how you read them. Thank you for your comments :)
Date: 12/15/2015 10:04:00 AM
A worthy poem, lest we forget. Please read my poems For the Fallen & Poppy. God Bless. D.
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Gail Underwood
Date: 12/15/2015 4:43:00 PM
Thank you Dave, I will read your poems shortly, looking forward to reading them. God Bless Gail

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