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Last Night While You Were Sleeping

Last night while you were sleeping, I could not help myself. I had a silent story for you, I just had to tell. I drew pictures with my fingertips, of hearts and "I love you's". Covering your soft smooth skin, with invisible tattoos. I saw you smile once or twice, it made me smile too. Right then and there I realized, I truly do love you. All choked up I grabbed your hand, and pressed it to my heart. Then gazed right down upon you like, a masterpiece of art. Your beauty overwhelmed me, I broke down into tears. Then whispered how much I love you, into your sleeping ears. I smiled as goosebumps on your skin, started to appear. Then laid with you and held you close, I had to have you near. I ran my fingers down your spine, and gently through your hair. The peaceful flicking candlelight, lit your skin so fare. I softly pressed my ear against, your back to hear you breathe. Then hummed a tune inside my head, singing "I believe." Though far away in dreamland, your heart is mine to keep. It's softly beating lullaby, helped sing me to sleep. I hope that you will dream of me, I know I'll dream of you. I'll hold you right here in my arms, you are my dream come true. For life's a tale of many things, and powers from above. But I know now without a doubt, the greatest one is love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/26/2011 5:08:00 PM
Just reading your poem allowed me what it's like to love someone. Amazing write. Your work is true and brilliant Keep writing :)
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Date: 10/26/2011 12:48:00 PM
Incredible feeling, this 'love', and an incredible homage to its power, strength and gentleness. Wonderful read, and congratulations on being featured!
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Date: 10/25/2011 3:32:00 PM
These lyrics would make a good song, Timmie. I like the sentiment - not too much and not too little. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 10/21/2011 6:24:00 PM
Thank you all for your support :)
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Date: 10/21/2011 6:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Timmie
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Date: 10/21/2011 5:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Timmie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/12/2011 1:36:00 PM
What happens when she wakes up? Do you have the courage to repeat yourself? - all this is projected by your piece. I like it. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 10/10/2011 10:16:00 AM
This is very beautiful. Congrats in your well-deserved win. Dinda
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Date: 10/10/2011 7:10:00 AM
Beautiful, congras on the win.
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Date: 10/9/2011 10:38:00 PM
Congrats Timmie on featured poem this week on PS.. wonderful write to share luv..
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Timmie Kreth
Date: 10/9/2011 10:51:00 PM
:) thanks
Date: 10/9/2011 5:15:00 PM
Congrats Timmie on a top ten win with this dynamic entry ..enjoy with luv..
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Timmie Kreth
Date: 10/9/2011 7:06:00 PM
:)
Date: 10/9/2011 12:12:00 PM
Wow Timmie. Such a depth of emotion spoken here. Congratulations on a well deserved win.
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Timmie Kreth
Date: 10/9/2011 12:12:00 PM
Thanks :)
Date: 10/9/2011 11:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Frank's "Dream" contest Timmie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/2/2011 4:42:00 PM
Thank you very much :)
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Date: 10/2/2011 4:17:00 PM
beautiful...i love it already...the best piece i have read so far this night...beautifully work,very detailed....thank you for this wonderful work....
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Timmie Kreth
Date: 10/2/2011 4:43:00 PM
Guess I should have put my response huh...oops. But thank you very much :)

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