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Last Night When You Were In Deep Sleep

Last night when you were in deep sleep I scribbled a poem on your bare back, a page so soft--with love bites and moles I used them to cut the t's and dot the i's; my finger tips' softly turn created ripples in a placid lake where you prepared to take a dip in your dream, my words followed you in that unknown land secretly to know your destination. I remembered to forget every scribbled word as it was my gift to the sleepless night, she was picking up each word one by one and kept them in her lap of silence. For the first time,you never knew how a poem was born and lost in the silence of night. © kash poet (kashinath karmakar) =====================================

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/20/2013 11:20:00 PM
Superb write! Congratulations!
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Date: 4/20/2013 11:33:00 AM
Eloquence at its finest, Kash. Congratulations on your win in Andrea's "fave poem" contest. Well done on this well-deserved win, my friend. :)
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Date: 4/20/2013 7:39:00 AM
Dreamy Kash ..congratulations
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Date: 4/19/2013 9:39:00 PM
Kash, Congratulations IN HONOR OF Andrea's favorite POEM contest. *Always & Forever' @->- LINDA -<-@
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Date: 4/19/2013 8:37:00 PM
Many congrats my dear friend Kash! This is indeed great and amazing ! I love it & so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing and the smiles here! Have a grace-filled day! Love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 4/19/2013 8:33:00 PM
Kash, a sweet win~*~SKAT
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Date: 4/19/2013 7:52:00 PM
How in heaven, I ever missed this earlier, I cannot imagine!! Marvelous, dear Kash!!
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Date: 3/31/2013 10:44:00 PM
Simply beautiful Kash, many congrats for this win.
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Date: 3/31/2013 8:19:00 PM
I surely remember this one.. Congrats on your win, Kash. A beautiful poem :)
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Date: 3/31/2013 4:29:00 PM
Kash, I really like this beautiful, romantic poem you have written! Congrats on your HM! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/31/2013 11:42:00 AM
Congrats, Kash. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 3/30/2013 10:59:00 PM
Kash, congratulations with your awesome love poem.... rendering the best part of life~ always*LINDA
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Date: 3/23/2013 9:31:00 AM
beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!
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Date: 2/7/2012 7:08:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this lovely poem, Kash! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/7/2012 1:32:00 PM
congrats Kash on another great win for this deeply intense poetry.. well deserved my friendf..luv..
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Date: 2/7/2012 11:59:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Your Own Favorite Poem" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/7/2012 10:06:00 AM
Congrats, Kash. Great write. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 2/7/2012 9:50:00 AM
Great verse Kash. Congratulations
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Date: 2/5/2012 9:19:00 AM
Kash I feel all the tenderness in this! I want to ask you to try something for me? [Of course save this version!] Try writing the same thing without the use of [I] aye? For who else would it be? And present tense..scribbling..send it to me to look at okies? Light and LOve Debi
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Date: 1/30/2012 12:19:00 AM
Wow! This is Wonderful Kash. Great work. :)
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Date: 1/22/2012 12:03:00 AM
Kash, Congratulations, in Matt's wonderful contest. Have a great one, always & forever PD
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Date: 1/20/2012 7:36:00 PM
What a wonderful imagination; a person 'becomes' the poem. Congratulations on your big win, Greg
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Date: 1/20/2012 6:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Matt's "Anything" contest Kash. Love,Carol
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Date: 1/19/2012 8:54:00 PM
Kash,I see you did REALLy well with this poem and so here is the first one you need to enter in the international contest! You haven't already used it in a past contest,have you. If not, then THIS one for sure. and BIG congrats for you.
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Date: 1/19/2012 8:17:00 PM
Great poem...congrats on 7th place in my "Anything" contest!!!
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