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Last Night

Should i stand or i should fall? i have been capped by one so dear south turned i what for? the moonlight play is done who will dance tonight? oh you will do just fine with those tiny legs of yours they look like grandpa's walking stick laughs more laughs,even more they are hot legs! if you don't like 'em mother does oh how my head aches so much play, talk, and hate food is ready that i will do in the morrow to my bed bamboo or water care i not buckets strikes,voice pitched cock crows. wake up! as i was thinking-saying

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/29/2009 6:35:00 AM
hey this is simply out of this world. very good a write. keep it on.
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Date: 9/24/2009 2:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2009 1:02:00 PM
Congrats Daniel on "Last Night" being featured. Vince
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Date: 8/3/2009 8:27:00 PM
Daniel - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 8/3/2009 4:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being selected to be featured this week . Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2009 1:15:00 PM
congrats on your feature write friend........:JP]
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Date: 8/3/2009 9:23:00 AM
congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane
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Date: 8/3/2009 4:36:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured>>James
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Date: 5/7/2009 6:31:00 AM
Beautiful... create your first album. All the best.
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Date: 5/6/2009 12:26:00 PM
Thank you, truly I tell you bleeseth are you my friend! - eduardo jeremiah orozco
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Date: 5/6/2009 9:55:00 AM
Very intriguing, Daniel! Nice work. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/2/2009 7:50:00 AM
Good write, tribute to your party eh? Welcome to the soup! Please keep sharing. - darkpoet
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Date: 4/28/2009 2:53:00 AM
Very well written nice poem.
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Date: 4/21/2009 10:54:00 AM
Beautiful.
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