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Last Night

Last night the moon had cause to blush, a far too passionate kiss even by moon standards deepening to a scarlet red something the couple had also said such warmth such embrace with a full heated face moon asking the sun for hour more of grace let the young lovers believe in forever....

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Date: 1/12/2023 4:19:00 PM
A hot one, Joe. Packed with imagery and emotion. Nothing like a great kiss. Whooh! PASSONATE PANGIE
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/13/2023 8:50:00 AM
ROFLMAO! Panagiota
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/13/2023 8:10:00 AM
Why waste lips on just one. More the merrier. Blessings my friend.
Date: 1/9/2023 2:46:00 AM
True love has no bounds. Loved your poem.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/9/2023 2:08:00 PM
Thank you, Victor; all heartfelt. Blessings!
Date: 1/8/2023 9:21:00 PM
A romantic poem with even the moon blushing red while the young lovers lie in deep embrace. . Immense effect with lesser words... ! Let the young lovers believe that this intensity will last forever. Have a great New Year of bliss and joy , dear Joe!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/9/2023 2:10:00 PM
The downside, it too often does not. The positive, such wonderful reason to try again. Blessings my friend!
Date: 1/8/2023 1:16:00 AM
Hey Joe….that moon has magical romantic powers for sure!! I do believe it caused the moon to blush the moon should have closed its eyes hehe!! Fun poem of romance….Enjoyed!! Debx
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/8/2023 11:47:00 AM
Such an addicted voyeur indeed:) What the heck. To each their own. Blessings my friend.
Date: 1/7/2023 9:20:00 PM
ahh, gotta give it to that moon, a sweetheart of a cupid ! That poem is really just wonderful. I really love it Joe. Nicest love poem I have read for ages. A definite Favorite for me.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/7/2023 9:34:00 PM
Thank you, Wendy; you're such an incurable romantic~ what the heck; I agree.

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