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Last Journey of a Pharaoh

Let me waver not at the last, approaching in my solitude. When death is near and fast let me accept the vicissitudes unlocked by the key of life, perpetuated by death’s rife, confusing the multitudes. Let me swim the mysterious sea at the head of the snake, fed by tears of the wife of Osiris. Let the key of the Nile partake in my safety for the journey. My flight through eternity, tho infinite in time to make. “key of life” and “key of the Nile” Embodied in the Ankh: Symbol of eternal life. © Jun 22 2010 For Amy’s contest

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Date: 7/7/2010 7:01:00 AM
very cool! Check out Connie & my sestina in progress Cleopatra!
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Date: 6/29/2010 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations Charles on your win in Amy Green's contest "The Ankh". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2010 4:24:00 PM
Congrats Charles on your big win in Amy's contest with this detailed write and big win to enjoy... a great insight journey... Pharaoh rocks.. like u.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..
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Date: 6/25/2010 2:23:00 PM
Soup mail in a moment, Charles.
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Date: 6/25/2010 2:00:00 PM
I love this 1st person view on the death of a Pharoh. Takes the reader inside his head. Excellent job! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/23/2010 5:16:00 PM
I don't know much about Ankh, but i like how mystical you made this one sound! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/23/2010 6:49:00 AM
An excellent interpretation of the symbol, complete with Egyptian references, Charles. Best wishes for the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/22/2010 6:41:00 PM
Love this one , nice angle ~~Enjoyed~Rick
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Date: 6/22/2010 8:37:00 AM
A beautiful write, I really enjoyed the read. Caryl
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