Last Glow

When the last glow of twilight fades, sweet demise I'll behold. 10/14/2016 Sad One-Liner

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2016 7:56:00 PM

by the way, about the dessert I told you, pumpkin cheesecake bars. I never searched yet for my recipe but just googled this one that looks pretty much the same. Here is the link:http://www.tasteofhome.com/recipes/cream-cheese-pumpkin-bars

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2016 7:54:00 PM

I love that sweet demise!! It's so fitting, nette!!

Balveen Cheema

Date: 10/15/2016 2:07:00 PM

Congrats Nette on your poignant one liner win! Balveen

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/15/2016 12:36:00 PM

I am not a fan of the one-liners, but this one is very very good!

Moon Flower

Date: 10/15/2016 10:13:00 AM

I like the imagery you use on this one, nette. Congrats on your placement. ;) Hugs

Sushma A. Singh

Date: 10/15/2016 5:17:00 AM

Nicely penned Congrats!

Paloma P

Date: 10/14/2016 9:16:00 AM

Poignantly sad, fine one line, good luck! :)