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Last Flight As I Get Low

The Last flight- as I get low Glistening glass shattered and smashed pieces laid on floor, With the news of an accident that made my twin soul bid good bye, Eclipsed life to live forever emotions and desires were cruelly denied, Vast ocean of deep grief it was as weightless I sank into my tears, Dark gloomy clouds veiled my sky those unending flushes of downpour. Oh God ! What did you get out of the parting, when fourteen years you had blessed me by ? Oh God ! The wonderful creator, why had you taken an avatar of a demon ? It was bubbling me, broken and hurt beyond any healing, My vivid colours lending hues to deprived faded into black, inked in glee, Lost in deeper seas of infinite darkness where not a single ray could lit, Time ate me every bit by bit as wheels of misfortune constantly spinned, Ghosts danced before my eyes, Depression pushed me further down, My brimming angst knew no bounds as I embraced death to soul's last flight ! Written July 23rd, 2015 For Casarah's contest "get low"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/28/2015 10:43:00 PM
I think this poem is amazing, Dr. Upma! The deep expressions and dark imagery really makes the reader feel the powerful emotions... Congrats on a great win!
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Date: 7/24/2015 4:55:00 PM
Congratulations on you win, yet it feels unnatural to congratulate such a poem filled with so much sadness..it touched me
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Date: 7/24/2015 3:22:00 PM
DR UPMA, Congrats in Casarah's getting low contest. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 7/24/2015 8:17:00 AM
Upma, wonderfully penned with deep emotions dripping off each word 7 and thanks for visiting my flag poem
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Date: 7/24/2015 1:30:00 AM
Two or three reads later and getting better each time. A very touching write, Upma, well done. Viv x
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Date: 7/23/2015 11:09:00 PM
yours truly embraces the essence of going low with sorrow and pain. Great entry!
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Date: 7/23/2015 6:43:00 PM
Interesting and vivid writing, grats on your win :")
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Date: 7/23/2015 3:28:00 PM
such a powerful write Dr Sharma - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/23/2015 2:47:00 PM
Super 7 from me for this fine poem. I think this shall do well in any contest!
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Date: 7/23/2015 5:07:00 AM
A very great write here, you also are a great, I enjoyed the read, it is excellence and thanks for your visit to my page to congratulate me on my acrostic win contest"celebrate independence".............A.M.
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Date: 7/23/2015 2:11:00 AM
A very moving and emotionally heartfelt entry Dr. Sharma. I hope to see it in lights! 7
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/23/2015 2:14:00 AM
Thnx Connie my dear friend! I hv missed u!
Date: 7/23/2015 12:56:00 AM
This is so powerful and deep.. very well written for the theme in Casarah's contest!! Best luck ahead to you, Dr. Sharma :)
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/23/2015 1:05:00 AM
Thnx Aiyah! Appreciate ur kind visit!

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