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Last Days With My Dad

LAST DAYS WITH MY DAD You adopted us giving love A mom & Dad & star above We grew with a future of our own Never left to do it alone Then it happened last year When you fell We all rushed to be there As you went through hell I felt I was at a loss As you laid there & tossed You, holding on saying goodbye Days later, you’re still alive Back & forth you came There was so much pain Finding out who you are As my tears begin to fall Last days with my dad I never really understood you Feeling so deep & sad Now I really do….. THANK YOU, THANK YOU By: Shawn Jones 3/ 15/02

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/18/2010 9:26:00 AM
good job Shawn, typo in 4th stanza , mush should be much, maybe edit and fix please, very heartfelt sentiment in your poem enjoyed it,
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