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Last Chance

This loneliness won't pass me by; I'm so depressed it makes me cry. All alone again today; No one will come out to play. I took her to the high school dance. She won't come out; she's had her chance. All I wanted was one true friend. Now I'm finished. This is the end. It feels as if my soul's infected; Once was loved, but now rejected. Looking down the barrel of this gun; If I pull the trigger, then it's done. I'll learn if God or Satan won.

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Date: 6/15/2017 7:37:00 PM
Lick you wounds, pray earnestly but never ever kill yourself!!!!!There are plenty of fish in the sea Rich; this girl that rejected you is not worth ending your life for!~Hugs~Che :)
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Date: 6/15/2017 7:33:00 PM
Look at it this way, Rich, Her loss is another girl's treasure. Just like the song, She could've had it all:)
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