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Last Chance

The smoke alarm goes off awakening me
I make sure my hubby is awake and grab my purse
Yes, my purse also called my suitcase by others
In my purse I have a change of undies, important
papers, and a weeks supply of medication for us both

Entry: "Last Chance Contest"
Sponsor: "Kristen Bruni"
Written: 02/06/2012
By: Carol Brown

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  1. Date: 5/8/2012 5:31:00 PM
    Wow you sure are prepared! Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 7:25:00 AM
    I really like this and it's funny, it's great

  1. Date: 2/16/2012 12:55:00 PM
    Love this Carol and so true. I think I'd grab my wife's...It may even have 3 meals for tomorrow!

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 3:45:00 PM
    funny lady Carol Brown, surely calls a noun a noun, suitcase it

    Date: 2/13/2012 4:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    has me smiling this time too, sweet Carol Brown wont make ya blue, not onetime...
  1. Date: 2/10/2012 9:27:00 AM
    Great preparation! I had to smile as my purse has a flashlight,safety pins,hand soap,Doctor cards,i've even said, maybe my children's birth certificates and shot records[ha]. good poem! Avis

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 7:58:00 AM
    Good choice and well prepared.

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 7:38:00 AM
    If only we all were so prepared! Good idea to have all that with you. Maybe I will make myself a bag too... :)

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 5:22:00 AM
    You had it right in the first place grab the honey and your off. The most important thing in your life isn't it. Great poem, love it Robert

  1. Date: 2/8/2012 1:15:00 PM
    one's bag must carry most necessary things, carol... you have a good head on your shoulders, and this splendid write validates that!... wonderful winning stuff..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 2/8/2012 1:10:00 PM
    LOL, I couldn't help smiling at the undies but very sensible indeed, my friend

  1. Date: 2/8/2012 8:30:00 AM
    Is there any message inside this poem, Carol. Cos I think it has some more deep within.. interesting write.

  1. Date: 2/8/2012 8:20:00 AM
    Very nicely penned for the contest,Carol.Thanks for congrats!

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 6:32:00 PM
    You are a VERY practical person, Carol. Grabbing the meds and papers. GOOD idea for this poem. So you have a "suitcase" purse too huh? I see I am not alone!!!

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 5:45:00 PM
    Very nice poem! I enjoyed reading this afternoon. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 12:49:00 PM
    Good thinking to have those items in case of an emergency..I had not thought of that..I guess everyone could use one of those purses or bags..Great work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Good luck in the contest.Reads like a winner to me..Sara

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 10:51:00 AM
    It seem like some of the womans purses are like suitcases..Funny story poem.Thanks for sharing it.God bless you, Hugs!Erich

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 10:49:00 AM
    Awesome entry Carol, just love the fact that you got all the necessities in your purse ;) all the best for the contest and thank you for your comments even though I've been absent from the Soup. Love Wilma

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 10:46:00 AM
    most important to us on soup, Carol, you save yourself. like this. harry

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 10:37:00 AM
    You are always carrying valuable things in your suitcase along with medicines which helps us all by inspiring to go ahead with writing always. It's last chance write but practically it's first chance..... Thanks for your inspiration. Best wishes all the time, loved bl

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 8:53:00 AM
    Good thinking, Carol. Great write. Enjoyed. Thanks for your kind words. Best to you and yours. luv Ralph