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Somewhere there’s a dance floor whispering to the cracks of the sidewalk leading up to your door. It doesn’t remember your name, but your gentle stride left marks on the wrists of time. I’m here, mopping up the blood, watching my first drink of the night condensate on the bar where you left your warmth. -James Kelley 2014, All rights reserved.

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Date: 1/5/2014 2:15:00 PM
Startling images--dance floor whispering to the cracks in the sidewalk, wrists of time. Sharp and memorable.
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James Kelley
Date: 3/13/2014 4:59:00 AM
Thank you so much Karen, sorry for the late reply
Date: 1/3/2014 10:21:00 AM
Well written poem with good imagery. Excellent. Thank you looking at my Haiku. Best wishes, Linda x
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James Kelley
Date: 1/3/2014 4:26:00 PM
Thanks Linda, glad you enjoyed it
Date: 1/2/2014 11:09:00 PM
Eloquent..
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James Kelley
Date: 1/2/2014 11:14:00 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting Maggie. I'm glad you like it.

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