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Last Breath of a Forgotten Dream

All the passion that was brewing inside Raging desires that engulfed your mind Beaten and broken yet survived every time I was your reason, your ultimate rhyme Mountains on shoulders that crushed your heart Poisoned your soul to tear me apart To lodge in conformity; the glorified lie You stopped believing, Today I die

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/22/2017 2:30:00 PM
for some reasons , these lines made me cry !! so beautiful !!! good job :)
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Wingless Moth
Date: 3/19/2018 6:07:00 AM
Thank you very much. Its nice to hear someone was moved by this. Hope i didn't bring up too much bad stuff. Sorry for the late reply.
Date: 11/22/2017 11:03:00 AM
Great stuff!
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Date: 11/22/2017 7:47:00 AM
Awesome and powerful poem. Congrats.
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Date: 10/31/2017 9:40:00 AM
You have a potent and poignant pen, I really enjoy your style. Welcome to Poetry Soup! xo mo
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Wingless Moth
Date: 11/8/2017 3:33:00 AM
Thank you very much. I have been replying to the comments but they somehow didn'd get posted. So sorry for that

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