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How heat of sultry summer's eve consumes me. Feisty bloody crimson glow ignites a flaming skyline; dusk radiant decorates the golden amber melt. Performance interrupted only by whistling voice. Westward night cloud drifts, a gentle floaty dream. A melody of feathered choirs gather - fatigued; vanishing into the moonlight to slumber. Delightful promise of attractive sunrise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/3/2009 12:26:00 AM
Cool title! Sumptuous imagery and striking language... neat alliterations too!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 4/2/2009 8:54:00 AM
Wonderful images of both the sunset and the sunrise, Anna-Marie. Love the way the birds herald the approach of evening. "Feathered choirs gather" is a beautiful thought!
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