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Three ….. huddle in a wet doorway ……brown bag sipping ….any port in a storm. John G. Lawless ©3/3/2018

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Date: 3/4/2018 9:57:00 AM
You portray such a lot in one single line, John. Superb end line! Regards // paul
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Date: 3/3/2018 2:59:00 PM
I can see them clearly, John. The ending phrase makes the poem!
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Date: 3/3/2018 10:58:00 AM
I found the imagery sad John thinkig of three down and outs drowning their sorrows with a bottle of cheap cider. Hugs Jan xx
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