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Pillows on the sky Greeting the waking peach tree They're happy and free

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/23/2009 8:46:00 AM
Beautiful poem. pls consider 5/7/5 and re-entry the second line as: Greeting the waking peach tree...thankfully. Wishing you all the best.
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Date: 7/13/2009 5:56:00 AM
nice contest entry! Light & Love
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Date: 6/27/2009 5:04:00 PM
pillows.....the things they remind me of.cute oneooooooooooo!
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Date: 6/26/2009 4:19:00 PM
You've got me smiling with this uplifting view. Thank you for sharing it with us. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 6/26/2009 8:19:00 AM
Delighful Haiku Nadine>>James
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