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Land of No Goodbyes

Promise we two will live forever In the land of no goodbyes Where tomorrow never quite reaches us Evermore to gaze in your eyes Through love's impassioned blindness We'll travel life's road together Helping each other through thick and thin Through all of life's stormy weather Where tomorrow never quite reaches us Forever in the land of today Loving and cherishing each moment Whatever may come our way © Jack Ellison 2013

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Date: 1/29/2013 7:06:00 AM
I like this my friend Jack, lovely poem! - Have a pleasant day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/29/2013 7:10:00 AM
Thank you my dear Anne Lise! A little different from my usual silly stuff eh!!! Love, Jack
Date: 1/27/2013 6:52:00 PM
Cute. Dreamy land! Love it, Jack. Forever land :)
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Date: 1/27/2013 7:11:00 PM
Dreamy... don't know what's gotten into me! Must be getting ready for Valentine's Day! LOL
Date: 1/27/2013 11:56:00 AM
This is one of the most beautiful poems I've ever read! I truly loved reading this amazing and heartfelt poem this afternoon! What an outstanding piece that you have written! This is a tremendous poem, a true loving piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/27/2013 12:56:00 PM
Can always count on you Russell for an outstanding review! Thanks once more my good friend... have a great day!
Date: 1/27/2013 10:41:00 AM
I'm not sure Cathy or Mike would aprove of that... But I'll be your friend when I get there... (Couldn't resist that one... beautiful poem).
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Date: 1/27/2013 10:56:00 AM
Maybe we could have a foursome... er... golf I mean! LOL See ya there... big hugs!
Date: 1/27/2013 8:33:00 AM
The last stanza is thrilling! "Where tomorrow never quiet reaches us!" Beautiful quatrain, Jack! Live in the moment...today! Thanks for the reminder! Hugs!
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Date: 1/27/2013 10:57:00 AM
WOW! What a beautiful thing to say my dear Eileen... you are SWEET! Hugs, Jack xox
Date: 1/27/2013 7:46:00 AM
This is very lovely Jack. I hope to be in that land one day. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 1/27/2013 8:11:00 AM
See you there, dear Lucilla!!! LOL Big hugs, Jack xox

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