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Land Beyond Reason

I am pulled there again, to that familiar place Where a voice in my head, on the brow of the past Whispers to me, with a beckoning plea Those speaking have been gone, for a long, long while Yet I stroll through their words that have not gone away I tend to look back at the bends in the river The treacherous waters, of the summers now vanished Finding reason, after reason, for looking behind Too often eyes focus on the years that have passed Years that have gone, and dreams that are lost I still hear old lyrics, and catch every word Is it way beyond reason, to lean into that world? Would my future be changed, if I went back again? Would I make a U-turn, to live in the past? There are reasons, I feel, that it gives me a bed A soft place to land, a place that is dead Beyond reason and logic, in the voice of my head ______________________

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/30/2013 1:23:00 AM
wow, I love this kind of poem, this theme, this style. Awesome and congrats. If PD didn't host these kinds of contests, I'd never get the chance to view some of your best works, Carrie.
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Date: 3/29/2013 8:38:00 PM
Hi Carrie, Congratulations with your "Any Poem Goes" in my contest. It was an honor in hosting this contest once again. Take care and enjoy the up coming Easter Holiday. Goodnight*Always*LINDA
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Date: 5/11/2012 8:16:00 PM
I missed this one. This sounds like me. I'd love to go back and I'd be a kid again, but only in those times. Forget the reason and logic. Who knows, maybe we do it over a million years from now.
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Date: 11/27/2011 10:11:00 PM
Very nice write Carrie! Yes, If I could I might just go back in time to make some changes, even though it would be a dangerous thing! I do however do it just in my head and I heed to the sound of my voice too! Though it usually isn't a reasonable or logical choice! I really enjoyed your poem tons!! Great work!!
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Date: 11/27/2011 2:32:00 PM
* "I Find Myself Continuing To Unto Your Gifted & Precious Beauties Verse * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Carrie * Although, Its Feels As Though Perhaps I Should Not? * As If Maybe Because of Your Hearts Continuum In The Shunning of Myself * I Am Perhaps Intruding Within Your World & Or Space? * Either Or, Once More, Very Gifted & Beautiful Painting * My Luv, Always & Forever * Sarah." *
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