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Land - Ocean

Land uses dress style
according to the climate. . . .
changing with seasons

Ocean is moody
chilling with a windless day. . . .
raging with tempests

Ocean does not care
how land looks or if she’s rough. . .
he hugs her shoreline

Written by Andrea Dietrich
For Linda-Marie's Contest:

HAIKU HODGEPODGE ..TRIO ... Poetry Contest

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  1. Date: 5/16/2015 11:18:00 AM
    the imagery is perfect Andrea * Forever ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 4:48:00 AM
    Andrea, first, cangrats on a well deserved win. Second, I just went on a cruise and you described what I saw, perfectly, because the ocean was really rough and it was bouncing me all over the place. The lines "Ocean is moody" and "Ocean does not care" is not only, poetically beautiful, but actually the truth and I found it out 1st hand. This poem really hit home. This is why I proudly have you on my 'fav's' list. ..............Cheers.....R.Ronthorpe

  1. Date: 2/3/2012 10:14:00 AM
    Congrats on your win Andrea soup mail

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 1:53:00 AM
    Congrats on your win in this contest Andrea really loved this poem.....spandan

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 3:51:00 PM
    congrats andrea, this one is perfection! I love the personification, and love that closing image of ocean hugging land, very cleverly written...I just read vienna's and she used similar personification for tree and leaf - I love both poems! :-)

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 2:06:00 PM
    I knew this would be at the top. Congrats on your win, Andrea! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 8:43:00 AM
    beautiful personification in this one, congrats on your win Andrea, I love it

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 7:32:00 AM
    Great personification of ocean and land, congrats. Andrea on achieving this through your special ways, love, vie

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 8:32:00 PM
    Grand congratulation on your win, my sweet friend for this contested wonderful haiku. Loved, bl

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 6:46:00 PM
    Congrats on the super win, luv, jag

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 4:25:00 PM
    Andrea congrats on your win, knew you wouldn't need luck..David

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 4:15:00 PM
    Perfect personification and imagery!! Nice going. Craig

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 1:58:00 PM
    Congratulations on your wonderful write Andrea. Great job! Jon

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 1:49:00 PM
    Congratulations on your super win in Linda-Marie's "Hodgepodge Trio"contest Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 1:15:00 PM
    congrats Andrea on success in my Haiku contest.. awesome entry luv..thankxxx..

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 4:59:00 AM
    Oh dear, what can i say that has not already been said, about this STUNNING Haiku. there Andrea i've said it. harry

    horsman Avatar harry horsman
    Date: 1/25/2012 5:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oop's David got there before me. harry
  1. Date: 1/24/2012 3:00:00 PM
    Really like this one..Good luck in PD's contest..Reads like winning material to me..Great choices for two contrasts..Sara

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 1:05:00 AM
    love it! just love it, specially that your opening line. breaking stuff here Andrea. ah, regarding your comment, I know it's not so good of me to delete poems but I do have issues of being tied down. LoL, i guess i'm too hard with myself. i keep it in my computers cos i like to read it too (LOL) but I still can't feel comfortable leaving trails. it's an affliction hun ~.~

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 2:07:00 PM
    lovely haiku - I just love the last one

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 7:14:00 AM
    Best wishes for the contest with this new styled lovely poem, thanks, bl