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(NOTE: This poem derived from texts of Hexagram 2 (Land/Receptive) of the I Ching, Keats "On A Dream", a Wiki article on summer solstice & a ScienceAlert article on Alzheimer research article (using various text manipulation techniques & editing the finally results to make it a little more readable and flowing)

Land. neural storm potential a sky day Earth's eyes so fortune Land. the noble time my Earth split invited misfortune in whirlwind Land. calm is pale Sun have its way Being proceeds Land. a solstice knows sorrows so its hell so feathers toward summer will tell Land. is outside being and southern hemisphere source beneficial Land. a master of whirlwind continuous form its gust the sorrows Land. neural declination skies so hail-stones so light northern hemisphere slept Land. the progress beneficial solar flares erupt they sleep progress Land. gained the fortune neural flowers' eventually progress beneficial pure day the Delphic sorrows in hell Land. away from my way not moving sprightly a circle of fortune Land. a pure gust says move it it storms a split day Land. a lost flaw snow and cold it rains Ching makes hail-stones Land. not a light there the storm not good flaws wait to thaw Land. pale persistence it is a mare says the storm Land. A fortune the sweet light calm feathers Land. sad hail-stones potential develops proceeds calmly the hell in lulled interests Land. a fair fortune calm light baffled skies it sorrows Land. seeing rain not time a hundred flowers acquiring sorrows Land. a time with sleep neuroleptic Delphic circle the lovers of misfortune Land. floated once a potential the Source saw pale progress Land. a lost day so floated and baffled so it goes to hell Land. a first and last floated away and slept without eyes Land. a lost southerly kiss solstice lulled solstice overhead is Land there will be Land.

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