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Lamenting On the Loss of Love

Heartless, I watch the world slowly turn outside my window Dreamy, I wander lost and lonely through my life Careful, She spoke in soft voice Or you will leave us all behind Angrily, A bird chirps among the trees Hateful, Its song calls out to all who hear Lover, She spoke in soft voice Will you take this cross to bare Redemption, Is a far off dream I’ve had Corruption, Bleeds from green grass around me Truth, She said crying It’s something a man would be able to see Sighing, I take my place in the bed next to her Resolve, Wraps my hands around her neck Screaming, She desperately claws at my face Is she digging for the reason she has not seen yet Heartless, I lie in the bed beside her Dreamy, I kiss her gently on the cheek Lover, I whisper softly in her ear Forgive me for the road I chose to take

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/5/2008 5:03:00 PM
Bradley, this is an amazing and intense write. Mark sure picked a winner in you, your talent is overwhelming. I read your others, and they are all equally outstanding. Hope to eventually comment on them all. Congratulations once again on your First Place win with Careless. Please keep writing as I look forward to reading more of your work. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/29/2008 1:03:00 AM
Loved it....
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Date: 7/9/2008 6:07:00 AM
Bradley, Welcome to PoetrySoup. I hope you will continue to write and share your excellent poetry with us. Love, Carol
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