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Lamenting on the Loss of Love

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Lamenting on the Loss of Love

I watch the world slowly turn outside my window
I wander lost and lonely through my life
She spoke in soft voice
Or you will leave us all behind

A bird chirps among the trees
Its song calls out to all who hear
She spoke in soft voice
Will you take this cross to bare

Is a far off dream I’ve had
Bleeds from green grass around me
She said crying
It’s something a man would be able to see

I take my place in the bed next to her
Wraps my hands around her neck
She desperately claws at my face
Is she digging for the reason she has not seen yet

I lie in the bed beside her
I kiss her gently on the cheek
I whisper softly in her ear
Forgive me for the road I chose to take

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  1. Date: 9/5/2008 5:03:00 PM
    Bradley, this is an amazing and intense write. Mark sure picked a winner in you, your talent is overwhelming. I read your others, and they are all equally outstanding. Hope to eventually comment on them all. Congratulations once again on your First Place win with Careless. Please keep writing as I look forward to reading more of your work. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 8/29/2008 1:03:00 AM
    Loved it....

  1. Date: 7/9/2008 6:07:00 AM
    Bradley, Welcome to PoetrySoup. I hope you will continue to write and share your excellent poetry with us. Love, Carol